Friday, August 28, 2009
I Evoke a Distant Summer
Tuesday, August 25, 2009
Remembering
Sunday, August 23, 2009
THE FIELD Revisited
The Field, Late May:
The field could not be seen from the road for it was hidden behind a drumlin topped with scattered pines. Automobiles roared by only 100 yards away, but the field remained undisturbed, unwatched.
Gently sloping down to the Cabot River, the field was 30 acres of rampant grass, briars, and Queen Anne’s Lace. Spotted with daisies an sumac, it everpossessed a cool breeze blowing from the west down the river.
From atop its slope, one could see twenty miles or more to the foothills of the Panther Range and the forests of the State Park. Rangers in the fire tower would sweep the field with their binoculars as they monitored their timber stand. For years they were the only ones to look on it, save for the few who passed in boats on the river, but they never realized the field was anything special.
It was a comforting sort of field to look upon, well landscaped, free and clean, dressed with wildflowers. The only things that seemed out of place were the scattered piles of stones.
Someone in the town of Cabot River had owned the field and the and forest that surrounded it for a long time. But the owner possessed much land and had never inspected this field until the day he sold it.
The field’s closest human neighbors were in the town, which was 15 miles away. At night from the top of the slope, the lights of Cabor River could be seen. But no one had ever looked from there. No one had ever been in the field at night since Cabot River became a town.
It was in that part of the countryside that is beyond the advertising line. As the road by the field went nowhere important in the tourist and hamburger world, the land was free of signs.
In the depths of the world’s great forests there are certainly places where no human foot has ever stepped. Ther are also places closer to civilization. Places that by nature’s kind chance have avoided the human sphere of control. The field was one such place. No human beings had ever been there. Not even the men who had built the road had climbed the drumlin and sidled throught the firs to tramp the land.
But people were there now. People with bulldozers and with trucks pouring cement into a wooden frame. Men in jeans with saws and hammers were building a house on the field. A road now wound over the drumlin and through the trees, and a truck had come and scattered gravel over it.
There was a great deal of noise in the field now, something long missing. There had not been the scratch of grasshoppers or the thumping of rabbits or the stir of butterflies for more than 100 years. Those things stayed away, not wanting to be part of the company of the field. And there were no rats on the bank where the meadow touched the Cabot River. The only sound that haunted the field was that of snakes bending their ways through the high grass, and that sound is close to silence.
The men were now roofing the new house, and they were being watched by a large rattlesnake who was sunning himself atop one of the piles of rocks. These incongruous rock piles dotted the field and several had been knocked over during the course of construction. But more than a hundred still stood. Piles of rock, 4 or 5 feet high, shaped like crescents, the inside of the curves toward the river. They would have made handy cover for a soldier to fight behind, but no battle had yet been fought in the field. Children would have loved the rock piles for they would make good hide and seek spots. Something could feel secure behind the rock piles. Something could use them as a last refuge.
Friday, August 21, 2009
Yoga and I
I have written a young adult novel called TISHA AND THE GIANT. It is the story of Tisha Olsen, a high school golden girl. She is sweet-natured, attractive, has supportive parents, is a really good soccer player, does well in school, blogs, and has a boyfriend she absolutely adores. But toward the end of her junior year, things start to come apart for Tisha. In the spring, her mom leaves Tisha and her father, and Tisha, because of her naivete and simple faith in the security and goodness of her life, never saw the signs that led up to it. In July, she is injured in a summer league game, so her senior soccer season is out. Then a few days into her senior year, her boyfriend Billy decides he’s interested in a beautiful freshman. All that was constant in Tisha’s life, save for her friends Becky and Sandra, seems to be gone.
Someone else who cares tremendously for Tisha is watching her. Kevin Conley is a 10th grader with a super crush on Tish. When he sees her in the hall or on the sidelines at soccer games, Kevin is thrilled, and when Tisha becomes his math tutor, he is overjoyed. But Kevin also worries about her, because on the first Friday of the school year, as he watches Tisha recording statistics on the side of the soccer field, he realizes someone else is watching her, too. A big bear of a man with a snarl for an expression constantly has his eyes on Tisha. Kevin is short and not too strong. He also isn’t a very good student, but he is brave and imaginative. At home, where he has to deal with an abusive father, Kevin has created an alter ego--a superhero called the Giant. Knowing that the big beast of a man is a danger to Tisha, Kevin decides that the Giant must be her protector.
As September progresses, Tisha works to put her troubles aside, become a stronger person, and maybe even do a little self-reivention. Kevin the GIant grows more mature and more determined as he watches out for his secret friend. Only the Lump never changes as he moves inexorably toward a place where he can do to Tisha what he feels he must do. Near the novel’s conclusion, the superheroic Giant must do battle with the Lump so Tisha will be safe.
I tried to deal with several themes in this YA novel including friendship, family issues, and the tremendous difficutlies that teenagers, especially girls, face growing up. I have spent virtually all my adult life working with and spending time with teenagers,;in fact, they’re probaby my favorite people. I believe the teens who live in the novel TISHA AND THE GIANT are like the ones I have a taught and known well over the years, bright, caring, and awfully vulnerable.
When I was teaching, I was always writing, but I never became fully involved until I became computer adept and was able to save and store and rewrite instantaneously. Since then I have written nine full-length plays for high school and community theatre, all of which have been successfully produced. In both 2001 and 2003, I won the SYRACUSE POST STANDARD’s short fiction contest. I attended two Highlights Foundation Workshops in Honesdale, Pa, where I worked with YA novelist Rich Wallace.
I write both a lot and passionately. I currently have 3 completed YA novel manuscripts, and parts of 2 others, and have never attempted to market them. I am really in need of representation and wonder if you might consider reading a bit of or a lot of TISHA AND THE GIANT.
Yours truly,
Greg Ellstrom